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PostSubject: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sat Jul 03, 2010 9:20 pm

Name: Uther Rosewood

Age: 27

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Birthplace: A Town somewhere in Talibar, by the name of "Ger'Wick"

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Two Handed Weaponry ( | | | | | | | | | | )

Allowed to pick a favored weapon when signing up with the order of paladins. He took up the hammer, a powerful weapon that could smash through many a foe. The longer he used this weapon the more he grew in strength.

Holy Powers

What few spells he knows, hes good at using them.

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(Childhood) Born in the town of Ger'Wick, which was a very religious town. His family naturally forced him into a holy path. From a young age Uther served as a preacher boy within the church of Tyr. Though he enjoyed service within the church but every once in a while he would hear idle talk between the priests of great heros who had commited great deeds within their travels. Most interested by the Paladins of the order which he soon found interest in joining.

(Early Adulthood) Reaching the ripe age of 18 he was finally able to prove himself to the church which got him inlisted within the local order of Paladins. Referred to as the "Order of the Black Thorn". Participating within local witch hunts, the purging of suspected heretics, Uther knew this was the lifestyle he always wanted.

(Adulthood) As life progressed for him, he became stronger with the hammer, and more attuned with the light. Uther became one of the most promising followers of Tyr, and it was chosen that Uther would be sent to spread the word of the church of Tyr in the surronding lands.

Alignment: Lawful Good

Favored Enemy: Heretics, and Undead.

Favored Weapon: The Two handed Hammer, though also has the ability to use many other two handed objects such as lampposts, or spears.

Deity: Tyr, God of Justice

Current Task:

1) To spread the faith of Tyr.
2) Set up a base of operations within Surna

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Two Handed Hammer + Back Hammer Holster
Book of Tyr (Holy Spellbook)
Decorative Steel Armor of the "Order of the Black Thorn"

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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sat Jul 03, 2010 9:35 pm

Eehhh. Something about this yells too much WoW to me, and I've played that shit for years now.
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sat Jul 03, 2010 9:39 pm

Well, some of the abilitys were based off of it.
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:30 pm

must

recruit

into

concordic knights

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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:47 pm

I like the idea. Needs good sided characters for plot.

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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:49 pm

Well, I love being the good guy in everything. And there was lack of good guys.

So I make him Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:02 am

Piotr1993 wrote:
Well, some of the abilitys were based off of it.

And the picture, name, and weapon, no offense.

The town does definitely need some more lawful good in it.
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:25 am

Well Im ok with changing spells and items and what not to make it Olden acceptable.

I just really want to play a good guy (Like I always do). What needs revision! (If anything)
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:19 am

"Uther"... I see what you did thar.

The items are good, I think and I like the picture. Perhaps Turn Undead and Blessing of Might could be changed a little?

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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:12 am

Piotr with a character that can fight?

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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:13 am

How about.

To replace:

Blessing of Might ---> Hymn of Strength

Turn Undead ---> Excorcism of Flesh

Lay on Hands ---> Seal of Restoration

Sanctify is fine as it is, though i suggest ---> Blessing of the Dead
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:33 am

PRAYER OF FORTITUDE ALL UP IN THIS BITCH

no but seriously, I support Phry's notion

rename them so they're less wow-ey
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Sun Jul 04, 2010 11:41 am

And that has been changed. I like Phry's names better anyways. They sound quite awesome.
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Mon Jul 05, 2010 2:31 pm

Bump for suggesting any more corrections. Anything else?
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Mon Jul 05, 2010 4:25 pm

Mackalian wrote:
PRAYER OF FORTITUDE ALL UP IN THIS BITCH

no but seriously, I support Phry's notion

rename them so they're less wow-ey

WoW'ey being D&D, really. Lay on Hands is from Dungeons and Dragons and such.

Otherwise I think it' s afine character
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Mon Jul 05, 2010 4:41 pm

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WoW'ey being D&D, really. Lay on Hands is from Dungeons and Dragons and such.

lay on hands might be from a DnD setting originally, but coupled with the picture it screams wow
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Tue Jul 06, 2010 1:38 pm

OK. So, I like the comments. So far we have changed just the spells names. Is there anything else that can be improved? If anything at all.
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Tue Jul 06, 2010 2:34 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Tue Jul 06, 2010 2:38 pm

PuPeT-KaI wrote:
why is there only cloth-protection in his pelval area.
if he was attacked by at least 2-3 people one of them would fucking bash that area wth something
and your cloth protection would do shit
then when you fall everyone would start beating you with unicorns
cuz i say so


EDIT:

oh yah
its probably just me, but
he kinda looks fat
and like he'd be -tall-

He trust he is a socially competent person so his fighting skills aren't needed. He'll just talk his way out of a situation.

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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Tue Jul 06, 2010 2:44 pm

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why is there only cloth-protection in his pelval area.

it's leather, and if it wasn't there he wouldn't be able to move his bloody legs

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then when you fall everyone would start beating you with unicorns

okay, people, i feel i really need to say this:

Splurting out completely random shit is not funny. "Randomness" is not funny whatsoever, it just makes you look like a complete and utter nilwit.
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:03 am

I think this character needs more suggestions! If everything is in order Then I think this character needs to be approved Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Thu Jul 08, 2010 7:15 am

Approve
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Thu Jul 08, 2010 8:12 am

Slight problem.

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Heretics

Talibarians don't see other talibarians as heretics. Only Occitan does.
And if this guy is going to try smiting Occitanians for being heretics.. then I have only one thing to say to you.

There is one thing this guy can't do that Occitan can, and will do to him, seeing how he is an active heretic towards the Saints.

Baptism by FLAMMEN.

But yeah. Define heretics.
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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Thu Jul 08, 2010 8:24 am

I remember while I was getting pictures for X I got that paladin picture you have like two times. O.O

I like this and I approve this character.

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PostSubject: Re: Uther Rosewood, Paladin of Tyr   Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:04 am

Piotr1993 wrote:
And that has been changed. I like Phry's names better anyways. They sound quite awesome.

Nu prawblem.
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