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PostSubject: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 10:53 am




Name: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja
Race: Ijudi zi Džungla
Aliases: Ogre (He doesn't like this name very much)
Current Residence: Ogromna is a wanderer, so his position is not fixed. Though he does spend most his time in or around Turmalis.
Faction: Ijudi Survival Organization
Sub-faction: -Null-
Birthplace: Velika zen Džungla
Personality: Kind, Intelligent, Thoughtful, and always tries to make new friends.
Age:
Second Stage-952 years young
Equipment: Five Large Med-Kits
Weapon:
A purchased Kha'laan Industries C-60 Hand Cannon.
Weapon Name: "Stinger"
How it was received: Ogromna purchased the Stinger for a relatively low price after aiding a trader being raided.
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  • Due to Ogromna's carapace, he has natural resistance towards blunt damage and is suited for long exposure in water. On the flip side, he has a natural weakness to heat and fire.

  • Since Ogromna is the only Ijudi who doesn't wear a body suit, this makes him the only Ijudi to produce food normally (As long as he is outside, he is never hungry).

  • Since Ogromna is a Zivotinja Clan member, his mental capacity and power exceeds over average. This allows him to be very good at at repairing things. When put to a point level, seven out of ten.

  • Ogromna's kind nature gives him very high charisma.



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Ogromna's player model is the "Collector" in this pack= http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=101843


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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:35 am

Just an FYI: You need to post new characters in the "approval" section. Once they've been approved, they get moved here.
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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:38 am

Oh boy. How do i move it?
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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:41 am

You can't, but it doesn't really matter.
If it gets disapproved (Which it won't), it'd get moved back and have [declined] in the title or something.

Just leave it for now, but don't forget to post it in the right section next time.
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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:41 am

An admunchie has to do it, I believe.

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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:42 am

Ok. Hopefully this guy will stay right here. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:46 am

Otherwise good, but I just find the toughness of these guys plus the helicopter a little iffy. More specifically
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The helicopter has a powerful armored plating capable of reflecting plasma, pulse, shrapnel, explosive, laser, gas, projectile, rock, and much more things that can be used to harm someone.

Could you please elaborate on this a little? How thick is the armor? How strong hits can it take? How many hits would be needed for the hull breach? How does the armor reflect all these, especially explosive, gas, projectile, rock, etc.? Not to be picky, but most of those could be deflected.

Also, how tough is Mudar's natural carapace?

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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:04 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:09 pm

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The helicopter has a ten inch thick powered armored plating that is powered by a small hydro-fusion generator which heats the exterior causing the projectiles and explosive to melt while plasma, pulse, and lasers are reflected off of the highly shined exterior.

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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:13 pm

wat wat?
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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:17 pm

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Typically this helicopter can hold off around one-thousand anti-aircraft rounds without showing signs of damage.

I really hope that helicopter has no weaponry on it, because it would be one of the single most powerful things in the entire damn planet. Besides, all those luxuries and thick armor plating is sure to weight it by a -lot-, thus making it drink fuel like a thirsty camel.

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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:20 pm

The helicopter is not armed at all. I need to edit it again to clarify the fuel source.
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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:25 pm

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The helicopter has a ten inch thick powered armored plating that is powered by a small hydro-fusion generator which heats the exterior causing the projectiles and explosive to melt while plasma, pulse, and lasers are reflected off of the highly shined exterior.

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Typically this helicopter can hold off around one-thousand anti-aircraft rounds without showing signs of damage.

This begs the question on how this person acquired more money than god to be able to not only apply these upgrades, but keep them on for more than three seconds.
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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:28 pm

How would it melt the explosives by the way? Wouldn't that just make them blow up right into it's surface?

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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:33 pm

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The helicopter has a ten inch thick powered armored plating that is powered by a small hydro-fusion generator which heats the exterior causing the projectiles and explosive to melt while plasma, pulse, and lasers are reflected off of the highly shined exterior.

This makes no sense you realize, if you heated up armor enough for bullets to melt and separate before they do major damage, your helicopter itself would catch fire in it's wiring, fuel tank and other vital parts that need to be kept cool very quickly. Not to mention the armor would just liquify and fall off.

And seeing how that's not possible, the bullets would enter the armor extremely easier since it's softened up by being heated up.

And if somehow bullets did melt that quickly when being fired, they'd stick to the armor, melt, and merge into it, effectively weighing you down over time and making your helicopter unable to take off after you just soaked up a ton of projectile rounds.

Not to mention "Highly shined armor" doesn't reflect lazers and shit, it needs to be a special material. That's like saying you get your car a luxury cleaning and hand polish, and it can deflect all high tech alien weapons.

Weapons or not, this is a very powergame-y piece of work and needs to be edited appropriately.


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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:33 pm

Keep in mind, Ogromna has saved many people from death and has also earned many life debts. Ogromna rarely asks for those debts but when he did in this case it was a major favor. He has made allies with military and mercenary groups so this allows him to get some equipment. Again, most of the money is provided as favors. The helicopter itself cost virtually nothing since it was all but destroyed. The misters on the inside of it are Ijudi plant life that naturally produce mist.
The heavy armor plating was recovered by the many attempts to destroy The Tree Of Life. Pirates would try to burn it down using large hover-tanks only to be demolished by scolding blobs of plasma. Everything else was salvaged metal, equipment or scrap. Keep in mind that Ogromna is a leader of a race. With the titles he has he is very respected and will not have any problems acquiring money.

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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:36 pm

By melting explosives I mean the tops of the warhead get fused to the helicopter without it detonating. Water jets will blast the explosives off the sides of the helicopter in mid-air. However, its not that every time a warhead fuses to the helicopter perfectly. There is a 74% chance of success while a 26% chance of the explosive detonating anyway. Usually the smaller explosives are the ones that detonate so the damage to the helicopter is minimal.
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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:39 pm

Doubt the helicopter will be very fast then, and it would be as easy to fly as a concrete block. As far as I know, helicopter usually aren't designed to be flying fortresses. You'd be far better off with a shield generator than a super-heavy armor plating, and the water tanks used to blast explosives and whatever else off would also weight quite literally a ton for the streams to be even remotely effective. As Blitz mentioned before, this helicopter seems really powergame-y.

Oh, and even if only the smaller explosives got through, the shockwaves would send this flying elephant rocking quite heavily.

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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:40 pm

Okay, maybe you don't know anything about guns in real life, that's fine, so here's a run-down/

Bullets, unless they are actually made to do so, do not EXPLODE. Most bullets being your typical full metal jacket round, are made to enter a person's body, or a vehicle's hull, and cause damage using only kinetic force acquired from the propulsion of the weapon it came from, be it gas, power, whatever.

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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:43 pm

I said explosive, not bullets. The bullets melt to the side and the explosives fuse to it. Bullets just become this liquidy mush that is easily cleaned off.
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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:44 pm

Blitz wrote:


And seeing how that's not possible, the bullets would enter the armor extremely easier since it's softened up by being heated up.

And if somehow bullets did melt that quickly when being fired, they'd stick to the armor, melt, and merge into it, effectively weighing you down over time and making your helicopter unable to take off after you just soaked up a ton of projectile rounds.

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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:44 pm

^ That. Even if the bullets melted, they would still do their damage before melting into the hull due to the kinetic energy. Now, if you try to say that they would melt BEFORE the impact, anyone inside of the chopper would be roast, and the helicopter itself would be just a puddle of molten metal and whatnot. Even if this was remotely possible, your helicopter would crash due to the extra weight.

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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:46 pm

This whole deflecting heated up 10 inch armor is not the kind of vehicle for a non-faction starting character.
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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:48 pm

How about i make the helicopter very fast, with a decent shield generator, and special flares that distract missiles and explosives. The purpose of the helicopter is basically to get the leader of the Ijudi out of a tight situation and keep him safe.
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PostSubject: Re: Mudar Putnik-Ogromna Zivotinja   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:51 pm

That sounds a lot better to me. A fast choppah that can used for quick getaways, rather than tanking fucktons of damage. Although, if the explosives aren't like guided missiles or seeking ones, they wouldn't be distracted by the flares, as they go straight forward pretty much.

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