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PostSubject: Mahir Denya   Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:27 am


Name: Mahir Denya

Race: Vaijmryana

Current Residence: Colony

Birthplace: Phonon - 156 years ago Earth time

Biography:
Born of the Mahir family line on the Vaijmryana home planet of Phonon, Mahir, being the first born and taking the family name as his own was thrust into the warrior caste known as "Denya." The warrior caste is similar to that of the Greek Spartans, but different in morality. Born into a "breed" of fighters but equal to priests of the Vaijmryana faith based around pacifism. Through his early life Mahir was trained in melee combat, specifically the Vaijmryana bladed weapons and the rare, but powerful ranged photon weapons. Alongside the physical training, there was intense spiritual and emotional training involved. This training unlocks the secrets of the Vaijmryana body. The Vaijmryana culture was not without its troubles, for Travis, Mahir's kin was not mentally able for his caste. Travis plotted throughout the years between training, ignoring the message and goal of it. In the Denya training a warrior must fight, confront the opposite of his spiritual truth, he must shed blood.

Pirates and slavers, a common to the outskirts of the Vaijmryana border never entered for fear of constant hunting, were often used to initiate the Vaijmryana warriors. Alone in a space craft sent out to prove his place in the caste was going to be challenged in multiple ways. His plotting brother had set a trap, to lure Mahir to slavers and be taken away. There was no actual point to it, other than Travis was completely unstable and insane by standards. Drifting and waiting in the craft made Mahir reflect on his life, and what is to come. This was short lived passing out by being gassed. A rigged system in his ship, he was never to finish his mission. For what seemed in an eternity, he dreamed he was fighting multiple other warriors, not of Vaijmryana blood, but of foreigners.

Waking Mahir was not in his craft but in a pit or a cell by glance he was still wearing his ceremonial armor. The bandits most likely never could get it off with its complex design. Unsettled and confused, but kept calm by his training he was soon hit by a rock, a waking call. He was beckoned by men above him, calling him a "Mrya," slang for his race in a chanting call. Mahir instantly knew what is was, it was a gravity cell that mimics gravity on the opposite side of the cell which is still on a horizontal plain. His education prepped him well for the situation, although it never could of been foreseen. It was a gladiator syndicate, ran by the area crime lords for entertainment and income. People of the underworld would pay well to see a Vaijmryana warrior take on their champions for high stakes.

For the next fifty or so years Mahir struggled through the hardest tests a warrior could face, not returning to claim his place in the caste shamed him and he could never go back to his Vaijmryana life. Various scars proved him by a warrior's honor but not Vaijmryana. Adapt overcome and improvise were his three words that he recited to himself before downing his foe for his life. Through the countless opponents his armor was green, symbolizing his duty to his clan, faded to black. Blaster fire, plasma, bullet impacts and flame tarnished the surface to a black. It was not violation of his spirituality to kill either, but natural instinct to survive. Undefeated his owners became bored with his show. No one wanted to challenge him, and he was extra baggage not bringing in spectators and money. Selling him to the highest bidder was the option his "owner" took. Being known in the small ring of the underground picked up the attention of a arms company. Galactic Armaments bought him for around 25,000 credits along with a few firearms, a great deal for a slave like Mahir.

Personality:The Vaijmryana warriors are similar to monks in nature. Silent and obedient to those above them even in slavery. Their culture tells them never to take revenge or seek blood, for it is only an emotional response.

Tasks:
-Find a Vaijmryana rifle
-Live
-Work for Galactic Armaments

Weaponry and Equipment
Vaijmryana Blade - Appearance
Vaijmryana Heavy Armor Appearance
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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Mon Jul 26, 2010 6:05 am

Since no one has really replied to this thread, i'll offer my misguided, probably irrelevant, opinion.

Backstory sufficiently long.
Interesting character details, such as weaponry and armour.
No gun until further notice.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Mon Jul 26, 2010 11:24 am

Thank you Phry for the valued input.

More would be valued by other community members.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Mon Jul 26, 2010 11:33 am

SWORDS, GOD DAMMIT. AARHRJGSDKFGHKJEHGKASDGHLASD.

Nice character anyway, Approved for what it's worth. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Mon Jul 26, 2010 1:49 pm

xeno586 wrote:
SWORDS, GOD DAMMIT. AARHRJGSDKFGHKJEHGKASDGHLASD.

Nice character anyway, Approved for what it's worth. Smile

Sword isn't for "Lets charge guns with bladed weapons," it has ceremonial meaning and sort of a last stand thing. Really, he has no weaponry yet.

Edit: The BSG OST is fucking amazing

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Mon Jul 26, 2010 5:30 pm

"Bring a sword to a gunfight, stab them while they're laughing."

Looks like a nice character so far. Hope he's not over-the-top powerful, though.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Tue Jul 27, 2010 4:24 pm

I'm not sure what Star Wars you were watching, but i'm not getting why swords would somehow dissapear in the future as a practical weapon of death.
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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Tue Jul 27, 2010 5:44 pm

Speaking of Star Wars, it appears this character is half Mandalorian.
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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:04 pm

Was the armour your first clue >.<?
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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:15 pm

JEENGO FEET
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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:49 pm

No. The emblem. The top part of the emblem is Mandalorian.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:29 pm

Yeah, the logo is combined with Mandalorian and something else. Was wandering and found it.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:36 am

Bump

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:47 pm

GREAT SUCCESS.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Thu Jul 29, 2010 10:45 pm

Is the second part of the icon eldar?
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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Thu Jul 29, 2010 10:46 pm

Phry wrote:
Is the second part of the icon eldar?

No idea. Maybe

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:57 am

I quite like this character, and it seems nobody else is really against it.
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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:36 pm

Edited the armor appearance picture

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Mon Aug 23, 2010 5:21 am

This thread was a month old; you bumped it so we could look at a picture?
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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:41 am

yeap

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Mon Aug 23, 2010 9:07 am

I don't see why not, i bump my character threads for even more redudant shit.
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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Mon Sep 20, 2010 11:22 pm

Don't deny it, my theme is fucking epic now.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Sun Feb 13, 2011 1:28 pm

I'm keeping this character, for any of these confusing roleplays.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:23 pm

then i'll move this to the proper section

give a physical description and a reason for the character to be here and it'll be accepted.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:44 pm

Kali wrote:
then i'll move this to the proper section

give a physical description and a reason for the character to be here and it'll be accepted.

Both of those are redundant.

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