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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:46 pm

they're not redundant because those are part of what i'm asking for in a character application

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:21 pm

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they're not redundant because those are part of what i'm asking for in a character application

Physical description is a server title, and not needed.

And "reason for the character to be here" is in the story.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:28 pm

physical description is server title, sure, yeah, but it also helps to give an idea of what the character is like, how strong they are, etc. for all i know your character could be an 15 foot tall giant with natural armor plates and enough strength to crush a car, and the whole reason i ask for physical descriptions is so that characters who are retardedly strong or invincible or have other completely idiotic physical features that make them overpowered or dumb are easily dealt with before they can settle in.

and no, there's nothing in your character's story that explains how he got to the planet or why he's here, and that's what i ask for.

all i'm asking for is just small amounts of information, nothing difficult.

i'm hardly asking you to write several pages. one or two lines will do.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:04 pm

You're exaggerating physical description, and how necessary it really is. And look here.

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Galactic Armaments bought him for around 25,000 credits along with a few firearms, a great deal for a slave like Mahir.

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-Work for Galactic Armaments

There's your reason.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Mon Feb 14, 2011 7:54 am

I don't see why you keep thinking you know physical description is nessecary or not, i wrote the criteria for what's nessecary in a character app and it was one of the few things i asked for, which is why i'm asking you to put it in.

And that's helpful but incredibly vague, when i say "a reason for the character to be here", a reason for the character to be on the planet and in this location is what i'm asking for.

If it's meant to be top secret or something then just post it anyway or write something like "he is here because this company is doing work on this planet in this location", nobody can know it ingame without metagaming.

As i've said before, all i'm asking for is one or two sentences, why are you so reluctant to add these things?

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:15 pm

Because they're stupid.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Mon Feb 14, 2011 4:16 pm

I'm asking you to put these things in the bio, because they are part of the requirements.

Stop being difficult and do it.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Tue Feb 15, 2011 3:51 pm

No, because they're stupid.

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PostSubject: Re: Mahir Denya   Tue Feb 15, 2011 3:55 pm

Well, suit yourself.

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