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PostSubject: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 7:42 pm

Scrapped

Bio: Derp derp derp. herp herp de de derp. Derp DErp herp herp. Derp derp herp.


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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 7:53 pm

Who is the earl?

Also, might want to make your bio longer, add what this guy carries around, and use better grammar.

Also, the bio makes no sense.
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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 8:00 pm

Wha-... Wait, what? Seriously, what? That bio is so confusing. Who are these people and- and... Just plain what.

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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 8:10 pm

i think i'll start with my first question of

what the hell is a noah

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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 8:44 pm

Wtf how is he so old?
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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 8:50 pm

Okay, what the hell.


edit; Oh, I see, it's a ripoff of some anime character. I would suggest remaking this page completely and trying something more original.
http://dgrayman.wikia.com/wiki/Tyki_Mikk
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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:22 pm

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Okay, what the hell.


edit; Oh, I see, it's a ripoff of some anime character. I would suggest remaking this page completely and trying something more original.
http://dgrayman.wikia.com/wiki/Tyki_Mikk

well sorry if i'm not original okay? At least I added my own back story and changed the personalities of each one. The only thing thats the same is name and what they look like. (except for the earl cause he looks strange)
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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:26 pm

Ummm, robots? Really?

Other than that, doesn't seem that bad, compared to before, still needs lots of work though.
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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:36 pm

Hoooooooooooooooooooooooo

No.

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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:37 pm

Sorry if my character bio isn't perfect but its my first time doing this bio thing. I've even created a side story in the radiation role play server for this and a LOT of people are involved. Its been going on for about 1 or 2 weeks. So it would be strange if i were to suddenly scrap it. Also how do you put in music like a theme song?
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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:38 pm

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xeno586 wrote:
Okay, what the hell.


edit; Oh, I see, it's a ripoff of some anime character. I would suggest remaking this page completely and trying something more original.
http://dgrayman.wikia.com/wiki/Tyki_Mikk

well sorry if i'm not original okay? At least I added my own back story and changed the personalities of each one. The only thing thats the same is name and what they look like. (except for the earl cause he looks strange)
Oh, what the hell. If lizard aliens can have boobs in this roleplay, then I suppose I can suspend my disbelief enough to not deny this.

Just tell me what the heck a Noah is, why he's so old, and why his eyes are yellow.
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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:40 pm

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his eyes are yellow.

He urinates through his eyes obviously.
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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:41 pm

xeno586 wrote:
CorruptShadow wrote:
xeno586 wrote:
Okay, what the hell.


edit; Oh, I see, it's a ripoff of some anime character. I would suggest remaking this page completely and trying something more original.
http://dgrayman.wikia.com/wiki/Tyki_Mikk

well sorry if i'm not original okay? At least I added my own back story and changed the personalities of each one. The only thing thats the same is name and what they look like. (except for the earl cause he looks strange)
Oh, what the hell. If lizard aliens can have boobs in this roleplay, then I suppose I can suspend my disbelief enough to not deny this.

Just tell me what the heck a Noah is, why he's so old, and why his eyes are yellow.

The reson he's so old is because Noahs live a long life. His age is like 26 for humans. A noah is a race of people from a planet. His eyes are yellow cause he's an ALIEN.
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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:41 pm

Xeloras wrote:
xeno586 wrote:
his eyes are yellow.

He urinates through his eyes obviously.
Now that's originality.


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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:44 pm

Without even researching this, Nar, I could tell that it was a ripoff. I don't know what D-Earl Grayman is about, but just by looking it over, viewing the images...even the names are the same.

I don't usually interfere in Eshira/Space Rp/Radiation business, but man, this is so bad I just need to say something.

It's worse than any other ripoff I've seen to date. At least Divinity, with his prince of persia / assassin's creed character, worked to integrate it into the lore. This character's bio just blathers on about things that nobody outside of the anime's fanbase would have any idea about, and makes no mention at ALL of Eshira, Space, or what have you. It didn't even care to explain what any of these things meant until it was edited just recently.

I hope you'll either deny this character outright or force it through strenuous changes before letting it pass.

Sheesh.

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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:47 pm

Tykki is going to DIE TOMMORROW so yeah just shut up about me making a bad bio. Because its totally fair to rip on me when this is the FIRST BIO FOR A CHARACTER IVE EVER WRITTEN.
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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Fri Nov 12, 2010 9:48 pm

if he's going to die tomorrow then why'd you bother to make a bio

or have you just decided to kill him off because of how severe of a trainwreck this thread's become

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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Sat Nov 13, 2010 11:34 am

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Tykki is going to DIE TOMMORROW so yeah just shut up about me making a bad bio. Because its totally fair to rip on me when this is the FIRST BIO FOR A CHARACTER IVE EVER WRITTEN.

We are sorry for not being physics, but if you have ever written any kind of stories before, even in school, you'd know that readers REALLY would appreciate at least a little bit of consistency. I'm rather sure that +95% of the people who have read this haven't gotten anything that's going on with this character. Also, as stated previously, a blatant ripoff.

Good day, sir.

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PostSubject: Re: Tykki Mykk   Sun Nov 14, 2010 12:06 am

I killed like 8 of the Noah so it should be more like 16 left alive, also HOLY SHIT MY EYES THAT HURT
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