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PostSubject: Vincent Esthiem   Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:56 pm

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Age: 32

Race: Human

Characteristics: Muscled, Ice Blue Eyes, Left Arm Robotic, Right Leg Robotic, Heart Robotic, Eyes Robotic

Height: 5'11

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

Biography: Vincent grew up the normal life with his family. He got good grades and had many friends. He didn't make the best choices growing up though. One night in the eleventh grade his friends were throwing a party when their parents weren't home. After the party when his friends and him were driving home drunk, a truck drove them off a road and off a cliff. The crash killed all of his friends and left Vincent brutally mutilated. It took him 7 months to be fully healed. Once he was fully healed and got back to school he was ridiculed for having prosthetic limbs. He couldn't take all the ridicule and suffering so he joined the UTC the moment he turned 18.

Personality: Vincent is normally calm, easygoing and shy. But he gets almost a second personality when he starts fighting. He is ruthless and will never stop trying to kill his target. Vincent will normally not trust someone if it is the first time they've met. Is embarrassed of his Bionic body parts and will usually hide them.

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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:06 pm

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Blade that slides out of left arm

no.

i think you need to go here instead.
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:57 pm

Pffffahahahahaahaha
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Mon Nov 22, 2010 4:06 pm

EZIO, I HAVE-A NO MONAY.
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Mon Nov 22, 2010 4:07 pm

Why, why would they give him a knife in his arm. Would they say "Oh look, a teenager who just barely survived a car crash (Horribly cliché by the way) let's insert cutlery in his arm, that'll make everything better." Not to mention, someone with low self esteem isn't the best leader out there, also, we don't know the extent of the damage that's gone on his person. For all we know he could have seven and a half functioning brain cells while the rest of his body is a hardened mixture of pimp-gold and solid ego. Have all his limbs been chopped off? Only two of them? Was he turned into an octopus man? These are things we need to know. If you go more in-depth in your bios, things will work out much better for you. Characters need to have more though than this.
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Mon Nov 22, 2010 4:19 pm

Xeloras wrote:
Why, why would they give him a knife in his arm. Would they say "Oh look, a teenager who just barely survived a car crash (Horribly cliché by the way) let's insert cutlery in his arm, that'll make everything better." Not to mention, someone with low self esteem isn't the best leader out there, also, we don't know the extent of the damage that's gone on his person. For all we know he could have seven and a half functioning brain cells while the rest of his body is a hardened mixture of pimp-gold and solid ego. Have all his limbs been chopped off? Only two of them? Was he turned into an octopus man? These are things we need to know. If you go more in-depth in your bios, things will work out much better for you. Characters need to have more though than this.

Don't try to fix it for him. It's way beyond being fixable.
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Mon Nov 22, 2010 10:37 pm

This dude is boss. He kicked a pistol I threw at his head from 3 feet away right out of the air.
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Tue Nov 23, 2010 5:39 am

Deny :/ this sounds rediculous
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Tue Nov 23, 2010 6:13 am

Cptnobvious wrote:
This dude is boss. He kicked a pistol I threw at his head from 3 feet away right out of the air.
Only to save his character's life, if it had hit his head, it would be an explosion of blood.
Graves threw it.
Cptn doesn't like ANY of Nega's characters.
ESPECIALLY the Noah.
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Tue Nov 23, 2010 10:19 am

I can't explode someone's head by throwing a pistol at them
Nor do I hate all his characters
I just hate the Noahs
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Tue Nov 23, 2010 11:35 am

Does anyone actually take Nega seriously anymore? I don't.
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Tue Nov 23, 2010 12:46 pm

Monkeyfisker wrote:
Does anyone actually take Nega seriously anymore? I don't.
Nobody really takes you seriously.
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Tue Nov 23, 2010 1:01 pm

cptkickercutleg wrote:
Monkeyfisker wrote:
Does anyone actually take Nega seriously anymore? I don't.
Nobody really takes you seriously.

That's hilarious coming from you.
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:10 pm

cptkickercutleg wrote:
Cptnobvious wrote:
This dude is boss. He kicked a pistol I threw at his head from 3 feet away right out of the air.
Only to save his character's life, if it had hit his head, it would be an explosion of blood.
Graves threw it.
Cptn doesn't like ANY of Nega's characters.
ESPECIALLY the Noah.

Last time I checked, the threat of dying isn't an excuse to powergame?

Owait, that applies to decent RP communities.
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Wed Nov 24, 2010 4:02 pm

nega needs to stop making overpowered and stupid in general characters.

dr. kumoi

all the durpy noahs

and now this fucker.

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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Wed Nov 24, 2010 5:23 pm

I DID suggest a lower rank, and yeah, he is like Cer, tweak your character, explain why he has a durp knife etc.
That is all
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Wed Nov 24, 2010 6:20 pm

cptkickercutleg wrote:
I DID suggest a lower rank, and yeah, he is like Cer, tweak your character, explain why he has a durp knife etc.
That is all

Yep, that's all, forget about the robotic limbs, heart and eyes, the knife is the only problem with this character.
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Wed Nov 24, 2010 6:29 pm

Prosthetic limbs and organs tend to be gained when you're hit by a dam truck.
Not to mention loss of the originals.
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Wed Nov 24, 2010 6:42 pm

prosthetics =/= bionics. prosthetic limbs are usually pretty weak and basic, i mean it's the future but prosthetic limbs and stuff still wouldn't be built for combat.

bionic limbs and upgrades would explain heightened strength/improved abilities, prosthetics don't. And doctors don't go "LOL LET'S GIVE HIM A HIDDEN KNIFE" when they're saving peoples lives.

If he just has prosthetics he probably couldn't punch someone without his arm falling off.

if you suddenly change it to say "bionics" there's also no logic in why they'd give a teenager bionic limbs instead of prosthetics.

I agree with what everyone else has said about the rank though. If he shows good leadership ICly then he'll ICly be promoted. You don't just say "he is good at being a leader and gets lots of promotions" because if you that then you're probably a bad leader. start at corporal or something.

plus yeah this is pretty much just Cer'Relaan but younger human and male

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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Thu Nov 25, 2010 8:20 am

I dare-say that the UTC would replace prosthetic limbs with bionic limbs for combat situations, and the knife could have been a custom addition to his arm that he bought himself.

[Edit:] I think this is MUCH better now that he's not a 1st lieutenant, he's not got durpy bionics, and he's a much quieter character all together, though not so much as to be invisible, the prosthetics are a nice touch as they give an odd physical factor that others will pick up on.


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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Thu Nov 25, 2010 8:28 am

Blitz wrote:
nega needs to stop making overpowered and stupid in general characters.

dr. kumoi

all the durpy noahs

and now this fucker.


All of the noahs are now scrapped i have no use for them
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:00 am

cptkickercutleg wrote:
I dare-say that the UTC would replace prosthetic limbs with bionic limbs for combat situations,

yeah but he got prosthetics before he joined the UTC

i doubt a military would let cripples in

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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:28 am

Kali wrote:
cptkickercutleg wrote:
I dare-say that the UTC would replace prosthetic limbs with bionic limbs for combat situations,

yeah but he got prosthetics before he joined the UTC

i doubt a military would let cripples in

This.
Why pay for fixing a cripple when there's an excess of healthy soldiers to take in?
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PostSubject: Re: Vincent Esthiem   Thu Nov 25, 2010 10:49 am

Because you could get a BIONIC CRIPPLE WITH A BUILT-IN WRIST BLADE
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