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PostSubject: Thor Dreadwind   Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:32 pm

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Name: Thor Dreadwind
Age: 98
Gender: Male
Race: Elf
Birthplace: Athena, far away from Surna.

Biography:
Thor was born in Athena, taken to the Ahdsurian Isles when he turned five. He was raised there, trained by the inhabitants in the ways of Archery, basic Ice magic, and Dual-Weapon combat. His training was long and harsh, but after turning eighty, he found the need to test himself. He took a small boat to Talibar, where he moved through the forests, eventually coming upon the city of Surna, where he now resides.

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Strength
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Archey
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Dual-Weapon Combat
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Heavy-Weapons Combat
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Bargain
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Intelligence & Cunning
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Agility
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Ice Magic
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Alignment: Neutral, True Neutral
Favored Enemy: Don't have one.
Favored Weapon: Long Bow
Deity: Lathander
Current Task: Don't have one.

Physical:
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 105 pounds
Hair Color: Brown Long Hair
Eye Color: Navy Blue

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PostSubject: Re: Thor Dreadwind   Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:17 pm

Thor is not a typical elven name.

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PostSubject: Re: Thor Dreadwind   Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:25 pm

Archery*. Bargaining is a useless skill, really, as your actions with players will deem the outcome. At least in my opinion. Also, I'm not sure but... 'Athena'?

Aside from the slightly odd first name and nitpicking, this seems acceptable.

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PostSubject: Re: Thor Dreadwind   Mon Feb 07, 2011 12:44 pm

Ehhhh, that's a really weak bio, if you can prove you can write fluently, then people tend to be more trusting towards you. Also, magic's a really general field, if you don't have any magical abilities I wouldn't even put it there, if you start learning some, then you could put the specific type there. I'm willing to accept it, I'd just really like a little more on the bio.
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PostSubject: Re: Thor Dreadwind   Mon Feb 07, 2011 3:33 pm

Xeloras wrote:
Ehhhh, that's a really weak bio, if you can prove you can write fluently, then people tend to be more trusting towards you. Also, magic's a really general field, if you don't have any magical abilities I wouldn't even put it there, if you start learning some, then you could put the specific type there. I'm willing to accept it, I'd just really like a little more on the bio.
I'll try write a new bio later today.

Edit: I redid the bio and few other things. Hope that is good.
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PostSubject: Re: Thor Dreadwind   Tue Feb 08, 2011 9:09 am

The name is incredibly odd, you might regret it later.

Regardless, it's currently acceptable pending bio tweaks.

(i.e. make it a bit longer)
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PostSubject: Re: Thor Dreadwind   Tue Feb 08, 2011 9:28 pm

Phry wrote:
The name is incredibly odd, you might regret it later.

Regardless, it's currently acceptable pending bio tweaks.

(i.e. make it a bit longer)
If I had a other name then I would change it, but I don't.
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PostSubject: Re: Thor Dreadwind   Tue Feb 08, 2011 9:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Thor Dreadwind   Fri Feb 11, 2011 8:07 pm

More opinions, will this be approved of or not?

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PostSubject: Re: Thor Dreadwind   Fri Feb 11, 2011 10:14 pm

I don't see why not, it looks okay, I'll give Wish the lowdown on magic.
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PostSubject: Re: Thor Dreadwind   Fri Feb 11, 2011 10:27 pm

Goofy name and unheard of birthplace are two unimportant flaws. Just move this to accepted.
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PostSubject: Re: Thor Dreadwind   Fri Feb 11, 2011 11:49 pm

It is done.

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