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PostSubject: Altrai   Wed Mar 30, 2011 1:35 am

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Age:26
Gender:Male
Race:Half-Elf
Birthplace:Solistron

Personality: Ignorant, Will most times hold a grudge but not always.

Biography:
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Skills:

Healing:
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Alignment: Lawful Good
Favored Enemy:Anything that will aggravate him
Favored Weapon:Family Sword


Deity:None
Current Task:

Survive: Eternal


- Equipment -

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Family Sword

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Clothing:
Black Shirt
White Pants
Steel Gauntlets
Brown Boots
Red ragged Cape
Leather Chestpiece ( As seen in Picture)

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None

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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Wed Mar 30, 2011 1:37 am

Note: Made at 1 in the morning so it may be rough.


Note Two: Theme song may not be fitting but personally it fits for me.


Note Three: Yes, this is my past char Rodgers, but I preferred to change the name so I would not have to truck around Generic "Steven Rodgers" everywhere.


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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Wed Mar 30, 2011 7:21 am

You know what could be cool is if that Altrai, upon first arriving in Surna, was fearful of possible discrimination against Elves / Half-Elves, and went by the generic name Steven Rodgers. However, since he's left Surna / due to his experiences in Surna, he's comfortable enough with himself to use his real, Elven name.

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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Wed Mar 30, 2011 8:03 am

Generic? How about John Smith.

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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:47 am

altrai reads like altair spelled by a 10 year old


sorry, it had to be done.
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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:43 am

Mack wrote:
altrai reads like altair spelled by a 10 year old


sorry, it had to be done.


Yes yes, It does sound that way.

fun fact for you though: Altair is the name of a solar object, so AC1 doesn't have the only Altair.


Pat wrote:
You know what could be cool is if that Altrai, upon first arriving in Surna, was fearful of possible discrimination against Elves / Half-Elves, and went by the generic name Steven Rodgers. However, since he's left Surna / due to his experiences in Surna, he's comfortable enough with himself to use his real, Elven name.

Pat, that is a absolutely WONDERFUL IDEA.
I hope you do not mind if i use that.
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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Wed Mar 30, 2011 11:04 am

Icaso wrote:
Yes yes, It does sound that way.

fun fact for you though: Altair is the name of a solar object, so AC1 doesn't have the only Altair.

youre the one who said AC1, not me. i only said it sounded like altair. i could have very well been referring to the star altair.

also, you said altair. that means i get to post a passage from my logs of glory.

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"It would be cruel of me to leave you like this, Malik." Altair's calm tone cut through the silent, and caused Malik's hand to clench beneath the surface of the water. A scowl crossed his features, while Altair spoke next - "And I am not a cruel person." His hand, free of the gloves he'd pulled off a good while earlier, snaked downward. This elicited another futile jerk from Malik.
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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Wed Mar 30, 2011 11:08 am

This is all true i suppose. I guess I believed you were referring to AC1. My apologies Mack.

Also what.
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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Wed Mar 30, 2011 12:31 pm

No offence, but this char page is kind of...really, really ugly.

You could have tried to put some effort into presentation. Also, there's a tag error before picture.

Other than that, it needs a bit of specification on 'healing'. Can he only barely fix a cut? Can he save someone from the brink of death?

Also: shouldn't this be in approval, not characters?
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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Wed Mar 30, 2011 1:50 pm

Phry wrote:
No offence, but this char page is kind of...really, really ugly.

You could have tried to put some effort into presentation. Also, there's a tag error before picture.

Other than that, it needs a bit of specification on 'healing'. Can he only barely fix a cut? Can he save someone from the brink of death?

Also: shouldn't this be in approval, not characters?



Fixed the tag error.

Most Oldfags will know what i mean on the healing but later on today I'll put a better explanation on it.


For the effort. Did i not say clearing it was made at 1 in the morning? Besides, Character pages should not need fancy skill ratios and such.


For the Approval thing, it does say re-posted at request.

Its also a simple change of character name from Generic to one less generic. But if i have to re-apply for all abilities/change of character name. I will do that at request of admin or vote.

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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Wed Mar 30, 2011 3:09 pm

he doesnt realise that super-fancy character pages with revolutionary design can't be demanded for every single character.

but yeah, healing magic needs to be alot more defined, there i can agree, even though i know what it is.
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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Wed Mar 30, 2011 4:41 pm

Roughly added Magic explanation. When i have more ideas i will add/edit


Also added "FANCY COLOURS"
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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Thu Mar 31, 2011 4:38 am

I dunno, it seems arrogant to post it directly in characters.

So far we've made every oldfag who decided to turn up again go through the approval process, presumably to make it fairer grounds. Y'know, cuz everyone else pretty much had to.

If i'm the only one who feels this way, then disregard it.

Looks a lot better now though, thank you for the effort.

One thing, you didn't really specifiy how adept he his at healing. We need to know his boundries, how good he is, just so we're not suprised when we see it put into practice. Can you do that?
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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:45 am

I second Phru on the healing part.

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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Thu Mar 31, 2011 2:15 pm

Updated with a Skill Mastery Bar
Also added how big of wounds he can heal correctly.

Is that what you wanted / needed Phry?
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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Thu Mar 31, 2011 2:25 pm

Resurrection isn't something easy or commonly taught, and is different from healing magic. Back from the brink I can see possible, back from the dead isn't so much.
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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Thu Mar 31, 2011 4:28 pm

Bringing people back to life is impossible. If someone dies, you have only minutes to resurrect them or else their soul is lost. Bringing them back afterward just creates a soulless automaton, akin to a zombie.
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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:34 pm

Basically, somebody needs to explain Vitamancy to him.










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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:43 pm

He will always be Steven Rodgers to me.

Also, I guess Vitamancy would be my job to explain.

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Bringing people back to life is impossible. If someone dies, you have only minutes to resurrect them or else their soul is lost. Bringing them back afterward just creates a soulless automaton, akin to a zombie.

Unless of course you bind the soul to an object, though there aren't many objects about that can properly hold a soul.

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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Thu Mar 31, 2011 7:18 pm

Even with some sort of item to hold the soul, you'd need to redesign the body from scratch, reversing decomposition and rebuilding the sacred field, a near impossible task for pretty much anyone.

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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Thu Mar 31, 2011 9:56 pm

Changed ONCE again. Jesus i need to spend all night reading lore again.

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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Mon Apr 04, 2011 12:07 pm

Phry wrote:
Basically, somebody needs to explain Vitamancy to him.

Still applies.

Preferably not me because my knowledge is limited on it.
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PostSubject: Re: Altrai   Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:22 pm

Phry wrote:
Phry wrote:
Basically, somebody needs to explain Vitamancy to him.

Still applies.

Preferably not me because my knowledge is limited on it.


Didn't Ruta and Pat,etc, already just explain it above?


Also i removed traces of resurrection did i not?
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